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Chris Bell's avatar

Cheers, Chris! I appreciate the feedback!

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That's a great setting, with a nice twist at the end. It's always good to try and open in the middle of the aciton or in the aftermath of something dramatic, and this does that well. Leaving the 'reason' a mystery also works nicely, as it lets the reader make up their own mind about what might have caused these events... 😎

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